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Heather C. May 18. 2012 -11:11 AM Isaiah, your article was very well written, I enjoyed reading it very much. I loved how it gave information on teens and alcohol. I personally didnt find anything wrong (0 Cons). Overall very good!

My Comment: I really do agee with but there still is some improvement she might not of noticed in my article.

Ashley M. May 18. 2012-11:21 AM This article was really good and provided a lot of great, interesting information about alcohol. I liked how the structure of this article was and how even though we did the same article on alcohol. I feel it could have been alittle longer (1 Con) but other than that it was really good.

My Comment: I agree with here and I think I could of writen it alittle longer but overall I love her review.